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Comment by Catherine Hammond on July 13, 2011 at 1:18

Oh Thank you both SO much!!! I have the pictures ready for episode 2. I am currently working on the script, and I agree, I need to figure out how to work on the transition timing. I am still adjusting to my movie maker program. I will get the hang of it. ^_^ You are both gems for watching and giving me some critique! Always appreciated! And I am over the moon to be a featured video!!! And Lilly you inspire me with your dioramas so a compliment on that from you is wonderful!! ^_^

Community Manager Comment by Simon Farnworth on July 12, 2011 at 20:05

I love it, well done you! I do agree with Lilly, some of the transitions were a little quick to read. Apart from that very good story telling and characterisation! I wanna know what happens next! :)

Groups Admin Comment by Lilly, Chevalier-Fox on July 12, 2011 at 8:33

very nicely done! the diorama is splendid ans the characters move very well presented. I love the story line.
it passes just a little to quick, not easy to read for no English native like me :) (when the text is a bit long like at the beginning when the two girls are talking)
I 'm waiting for episode 2